That becoming a businessman is my dream when I was a little girl. Entering university, ftu2, with the major in business, I have achieved a part of my goal. Next time, detail is about 3 years, I want to get 7.5 ielts and get university degree in A level. I know that this path will be not an easy one and there will be challenges with me. However, believing that if I keep eyes in the way and work towards it, even with obstacles in my way, I am able to achieve my goal to make a better life for my family and myself.
To achieve this goal, there are a lot of difficult things and works I need to do. To get 7,5 ielts, I will study English centre next time and at the same time, I also will taught myself at home. I will improve all skills, particular in speaking skill and writing skill because I’m bad in it and it is really necessary for my job in the future. Moreover, to get university degree in A level, I have to study hard more and more,concentrate in class, do more research in subjects, get to meet with new people in the school who will assist me with my studies, satisfy my curiosity in the subject, build up my confidence, improve my skills and lastly provide more technological tools and information that are well related to my course. Besides, I think I will do part-time jobs to know more knowledge and understand how to organize a company.
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Subject: Please review my IELTS essay
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Topic: Describe your education goal and what you need to do to achieve it .
My essay:
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That Becoming a businessman is (wrong tense) my dream when I was a little girl.
You write that it was a dream, but now you don't have this dream.
If you want to say it is still your dream, then you must write this:
Becoming a businessman (businesswoman) has been my dream since