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Chiachen Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Describe your best friend. Give a unique feature and similar features you two share.

My friend is tall, she has big lips, she's thin, she has blond curly hair. We have the same hair color. Pease help correct it.
  

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Hi, Your first sentence is a run-on sentence that incorrectly joins 4 sentences. Would you like to try to correct it? I'd b happy to check it again.

  • Hi, Your first sentence is a run-on sentence that incorrectly joins 4 sentences.
  • Would you like to try to correct it?
  • I'd b happy to check it again.
  • Clive
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Hi,

Your first sentence is a run-on sentence that incorrectly joins 4 sentences.
Would you like to try to correct it? I'd b happy to check it again.

Clive
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My friend is tall. She has big full lips. She is thin. She has blonde curly hair. We have the same hair color.
I coundn't locate one of my questions posted (Could it be deleted? I Hope not). Would you please help me check/correct it also. Thank you.

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I corrected the word blond the first time, but missed it again.
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Since it's about a best friend, I would write beautiful big full lips.
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Hi.

It needs more than just correction. You’re asked to make a descriptive contrast between your friend and yourself, pointing out the specific similarities and dissimilarities you two have. Your description looks very short and skimpy, and, hence, your teacher may ask for more details. The best way to do such exercises is to place side-by-side a clear full view photo of each of you and
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"beautiful big lips" would mean you have ugly, thin lips. You're making a contrast. Be careful. Emotion: wink
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Please post your letter as a different thread. We will be happy to refine your efforts.
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Rewrite: Describe your best friend using the vocabulary words from this lesson. What does he or she look like? Does he or she have a unique feature? Do you and your friend have similar features? I didn't think I was writing about the contrast. Still not sure the best way to write or at least write in good English.
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Do yo you mean that I could repost the above question once more.
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I'll write: My best friend is tall and thin/slender. She has big beautiful full lips and blond curly hair. My best friend and I have one thing in common in our look, we both have blond hair.

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