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USF Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Describe the difference

Could you please help me to describe these two figures? Particularly, the part in bold.


Fig 11


Fig 12
"As shown in Figures 11 and 12, changing the hot zone’s temperature by±10°C causes a considerable change in the deposition rate. This occurs because of the reaction activation energy, which is a function of reaction chamber temperature. In addition, Figures 11 and 12 shows that the uniformity of the deposition rate by increasing temperature of wafers is getting worse, but it can be seen that they are still approximately in the same line."
  

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It is not about scientific things! It is about simple English. So don't avoid this, just please check grammar and help me to use proper words.

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  • It is not about scientific things!
  • It is about simple English.
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It is not about scientific things! It is about simple English. So don't avoid this, just please check grammar and help me to use proper words.
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Hi,

You can't say uniformity gets worse.
You can't say uniformity by increasing . . . .

How about this?
In addition, Figures 11 and 12 show that, when the temperature of the wafers inc
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youzouIt is not about scientific things! It is about simple English. So don't avoid this, just please check grammar and help me to use proper words.
I can see that you have not yet learned courtesy. Clive has been very kind indeed to bother to respond to your demand.
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Mister MicawberI can see that you have not yet learned courtesy.
Thanks for the reply, and I am sorry. I was just trying to make a friendly comment, like in parenthesis. I am learning English, so I would appreciate it if you could correct me.

How about this:

instead of "So don't avoid this, just please check grammar and help me to use proper
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Hi,

Indeed, some words can be tricky.
it can often sound negative to suggest that someone may perhaps be avoidiing something.

Clive.
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Thank you very much Clive for answering. As Mister Micawber said I wasn't polite so thanks again for ignoring that.
Clivethe uniformity of the deposition rate decreases. However, it can be seen that they are still approximately in the same line.
Do you think if I used e.g. "the uniformity of the deposition rate decreases, but it can be seen that the magnitu
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Cliveit can often sound negative to suggest that someone may perhaps be avoidiing something.
Thank you, but could you please explain how avoid can bear a negative meaning?
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youzouIt is not about scientific things! It is about simple English. So don't avoid this, just please check grammar and help me to use proper words.
Clive has hit upon one point. There are also these:

It is not about scientific things! -- Are we not to be trusted to understand science?
It is about simple English. - Is it only simple
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Hi,

Yes, better.
But 'approximately . . . constant. . . ' sounds a little awkward or even contradictory to me.

Clive
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Mister MicawberIt is not about scientific things! -- Are we not to be trusted to understand science?
Oh! That because people said that because they didn't know about my field, this is hard to correct my writings.
Mister MicawberIt is about simple English. - Is it only simple English that we can check, then?
Sorry, I was thin
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