Describe people

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Today I’m going to share with you about the person that influences me the most. My mother. There are some reasons why I said that. Firstly, my mom is the bread winner, a strong woman to overcome difficult situation to get successful business woman. so ,my neighbors and i look up to her. Moreover, she is a good sense of humor. She can cheer everybody up, and when she tells stories, everybody laughs non stop. Furthermore, she has hands-on experience about life. When I’m in trouble, I often turn to my mom for advice. because my mom has a positive outlook on life. you know, people said that I took after my mum, specially my eyes. That makes me so happy. These above reasons she has the greatest impact on me.

My son. He is 2 years old. He is real good looking with oval face and chubby shape. He possesses not only rose cheeks with fair complexion but also pointed nose, which draws people’s attention. He has a sweet tooth so that I have to limit his eating candy in a day. You know candy is not good for his health. Moreover he is a quite energetic child. He never keeps himself quite, not even for a single moment, apart from when he sleep, the world becomes calm. Furthermore he is fully emotional. Whenever I feel tired after work or my mood is down, he comes up and talks to me with his honeyed words. Those healing words make me so much better. Each time, he says that “mum, I love you so much, I feel like walking on air. Furthermore, spending time with him makes me feel contented. I usually spend three hours per day to play with him and keep him sleeping with fairy tales. When playing with him, I forget worries and sweet memories of my childhood return. Any way, He is always the apple of my eye. These above reasons I’m keen on spending time with my son.