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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
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Describe a bag you want own

it is true that music make need of everybody because all human love to listen a song but some masses sure that it not good. i will dicuss about both side point in upcoming pragraph.

to commence with there is no doubt that

  

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Your text has no relation with the subject of your post. The text is very poor English. I have highlighted the words with errors.

  • Your text has no relation with the subject of your post.
  • The text is very poor English.
  • I have highlighted the words with errors.
  • All sentences must begin with a capital letter.
  • "i " is the 9th letter of the alphabet.
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Your text has no relation with the subject of your post.

The text is very poor English. I have highlighted the words with errors.

  • All sentences must begin with a capital letter.
  • "i " is the 9th letter of the alphabet. It does not refer to a person.
  • There are missing verbs, incorrect collocations, missing articles (a, the, an), spelling errors and incorrect use

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