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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago

Depressing Poem... If anyone can help me improve it, that would be great

0Here it goes... It's dedicated to my recent breakup (recent = 1 year ago... and still can't truly get over it)... But you know what they say: Lucky with fruit, unlucky in love...02br
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00There we were, at the break of dawn02br
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00Two young hands holding tight02br
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00Knew not neither of us that you’ll soon be gone02br
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00And never again we’ll see the morning sun02br
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00 00Together, and lose we will the beauty of that sight.02br
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00Along the arid lands of 00 now I walk02br
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00All but you – recalling…02br
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00And day by day I’ll try to say your name out loud02br
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00But one cannot address to whom one did forgot.02br
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00Collapsing on the sand I die02br
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00And in these very moments of finality02br
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00The sun is rising slowly on the morning sky02br
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00And far it casts two shadows that kiss upon the ground.02br
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00Thanks for reading this. Hope you can improve it, I'm not english so I guess I'm not good at writing 01i00english02i00 poetry, but I gave it a try.02br
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00-- Ovidiu0-
  
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