Depressing Poem... If anyone can help me improve it, that would be great
0Here it goes... It's dedicated to my recent breakup (recent = 1 year ago... and still can't truly get over it)... But you know what they say: Lucky with fruit, unlucky in love...02br 02br 01b00No Title (yet)02b02br 02br 00There we were, at the break of dawn02br 02br 00Two young hands holding tight02br 02br 00Knew not neither of us that you’ll soon be gone02br 02br 00And never again we’ll see the morning sun02br 02br 00 00Together, and lose we will the beauty of that sight.02br 02br 02br 02br 00Along the arid lands of 00 now I walk02br 02br 00All but you – recalling…02br 02br 00And day by day I’ll try to say your name out loud02br 02br 00But one cannot address to whom one did forgot.02br 02br 00Collapsing on the sand I die02br 02br 00And in these very moments of finality02br 02br 00The sun is rising slowly on the morning sky02br 02br 00And far it casts two shadows that kiss upon the ground.02br 02br 00Thanks for reading this. Hope you can improve it, I'm not english so I guess I'm not good at writing 01i00english02i00 poetry, but I gave it a try.02br 02br 00-- Ovidiu0-
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