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Uktous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Demonstrate initiative, commitment, and responsibility

Hi,

Background:
There is a requirement on job candidate.
Demonstrate initiative, commitment, and responsibility as a team member.

Question1:
Can sentence 1 tell the employer that I meet those 3 attributes required ?
Question2:
Do I have to say sentence 2 so as to tell the employer that I meet those 3 attributes required ?

Sentence1:
I am initiative, committed and responsible.
Sentence2:
I always demonstrate initiative, commitment, and responsibility.

Note:
I know that even I say I have those attributes doesn't mean the employer think I have.

Thanks
  

Top answer

Hi, Only #2 is correct. But 'demonstrate' means that your application needs to include actual details of situations in which you have shown these qualities. Clive

  • Hi, Only #2 is correct.
  • But 'demonstrate' means that your application needs to include actual details of situations in which you have shown these qualities.
  • Clive
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Hi,

Only #2 is correct.

But 'demonstrate' means that your application needs to include actual details of situations in which you have shown these qualities.

Clive
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Question1: Can sentence 1 tell the employer that I meet those 3 attributes required ?-- No. You have said nothing to support the statement.

Question2: Do I have to say sentence 2 so as to tell the employer that I meet those 3 attributes required ?-- No. It tells the employer nothing. You need to give specific examples of your previous training and experience that prove you

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