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Ben9108 Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

Demolish Wall

I would be grateful if you can help me to correct my e-mail.

Dear Manager

Referring to the attached owners’ letter dated 20 Sept 2006 concerning to seek our approval for demolishing concrete wall as shown on the attached part plan drawing,

I would like to hunt for your assistance in resolving the owner request.
  

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Hi, Dear Manager Referring to the attached owners’ letter dated 20 Sept 2006 concerning to seek our approval for demolishing concrete wall as shown on the attached part plan drawing, I would like to hunt for your assistance in resolving the owner request. Dear Manager Where I live, in a letter we'd say 'Dear sir', and in an email we'd just not start with a greeting at all. We don't use titles when we greet someone.

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  • Hi, Dear Manager Referring to the attached owners’ letter dated 20 Sept 2006 concerning to seek our approval for demolishing concrete wall as shown on the attached part plan drawing, I would like to hunt for your assistance in resolving the owner request.
  • Dear Manager Where I live, in a letter we'd say 'Dear sir', and in an email we'd just not start with a greeting at all.
  • We don't use titles when we greet someone.
  • But in your culture, perhaps this is necessary.
  • In the attached letter of 20 Sept.
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Hi,

Dear Manager

Referring to the attached owners’ letter dated 20 Sept 2006 concerning to seek our approval for demolishing concrete wall as shown on the attached part plan drawing,

I would like to hunt for your assistance in resolving the owner request.

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