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Ben9108 Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

delivery

0we would like to inform that the first and second batch of the A/C units will be delivered in early March and April 2006 respectively.02br
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02font 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-

— Clive

  • 02font 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-
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0Hi Ben,02br
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01font01font00W02font00e would like to inform 01font00you 02font00that the first and second batch01font00es02font00 of 01font00(remove 'the')02font00 A/C unit
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0 "inform" needs to be followed by some word or words indicating who is being informed.02br
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00 We would like to inform 01i00you02i00 that the first....02br
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00 And put a comma before 01i00respectively02i00.02br
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00 Other than that, I think your sentence is really very good.0
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01cite10Clive12cite10Hi Ben,12br
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11font11font10W12font10e would like to inform 11font10you 12font10that the first and second batch11font10es12font10 of 11
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0Hi, 02br
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00I wouldn't say it is necessary to remove 'the'. Without a context, it just sounded better to me without it. After all, maybe the customer 01i00doesn't 02i00know about the A/C units, maybe it was discussed a year ago and the customer has forgotten. 02br
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00In the right context, 'the' would sound fine.02br
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01cite10Clive12cite10Hi, 12br
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10I wouldn't say it is necessary to remove 'the'. Without a context, it just sounded better to me without it. After all, maybe the customer 11i10doesn't 12i10know about the A/C units, maybe it was discussed a year ago and the customer has forgotten. 12br
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0 Thanks clive and rishonly 0-
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