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Soheil1 Posted 13 years ago
Vocabulary
Deliver
Hi
Have I used 'deliver' correctly in:
In their beliefs the origins of the staff go back to the time of Adam(PBUH) and the wooden piece that they delivered with themselves from the Paradise to the Earth.
?Thanks in advance
Have I used 'deliver' correctly in:
In their beliefs the origins of the staff go back to the time of Adam(PBUH) and the wooden piece that they delivered with themselves from the Paradise to the Earth.
?Thanks in advance
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that they brought with them f rom Paradise to Earth. ")
- that they brought with them f rom Paradise to Earth.
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... that they brought with them from Paradise to Earth. (If you are speaking of Adam, who is "they?")
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Sorry, what about:
In their beliefs the origins of the staff go back to the time of Adam(PBUH) and the wooden piece that they brought with himself from the Paradise to the Earth.
In their beliefs the origins of the staff go back to the time of Adam(PBUH) and the wooden piece that they brought with himself from the Paradise to the Earth.
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In their beliefs, the origins of the staff go back to the time of Adam(PBUH) and the wooden piece that they brought with himself from the Paradise to the Eart
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Why have you yellowed them? There are errors in the highlighted areas.
Beliefs is wrong?? No, but there needs to be a comma after an opening phrase.
Beliefs is wrong?? No, but there needs to be a comma after an opening phrase.
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AlpheccaStars was saying you need a comma after beliefs. She also pointed out that they and himself will not work together, and the is not needed before Paradise or Earth.
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