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Petusek Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Definitness, indefinitness, complete confusion

Hello,

Could somebody, please, check the following snippet (including the caption)? My native language has no articles and I still haven't gained the confidence and get confused, especially when as tired as now.

Many thanks in advance, and if you spot any other mistakes (I keep making punctuation and other mistakes, but there may be some vocabulary and collocation issues as well), I'll be grateful for their correction as well, of course.

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Monitoring the competitive environment

The added value of the [software component], which summarizes the above-mentioned business opportunities, consists in keeping track of competitor behaviour. Through continuous monitoring and evaluation of the competitive environment, the user gains the information necessary for successful implementation of other business opportunities and the needed competitive advantage (an idea of the price, scope, style of dealings, etc.).
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Thanks a lot once more!

Best.

P.
  

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I cannot find anything to correct! Good work.

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I cannot find anything to correct! Good work.
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Thanks a lot for the check! Emotion: smile

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