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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Define success around

Is this sentence natural?

You don’t define success around what others define theirs by.


Thank you

  

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It's inconsistent. You use 'define around' and 'define by'. 'around' is not usually seen with 'define'.

  • It's inconsistent.
  • You use 'define around' and 'define by'.
  • 'around' is not usually seen with 'define'.
  • I'd prefer to change 'around' to 'by', although you could change 'by' to 'around' just for the sake of consistency.
  • CJ
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It's inconsistent. You use 'define around' and 'define by'. 'around' is not usually seen with 'define'.

I'd prefer to change 'around' to 'by', although you could change 'by' to 'around' just for the sake of consistency.

CJ

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Thank you CJ


so the sentence would be


You don’t define success by what others define success by.


Correct?



Could I ask you something that has to do with consistency?




Which word would you use?

Is it correct to say “the temperature high will be”?


The temperature high will be 12 degrees tomorrow which is 2 deg

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