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If you see any mistakes in the following sentences, can I have your comments?

( teacher to students)

Last time, you told me that you would like to have a time to learn more about British culture through this class. And you suggested that you make a group presenation with the topic of your interests regarding British culture. ... so have you diceded about the partners you are going to work with and the topics that you will discuss through your presentation?
  

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Hi, I've highlighted some things, eiher spelling errors or wording that seems to me unnecesary. Last time, you told me that you would like to have a time to learn more about British culture through this class . And you suggested that you make a group presenation with the topic of your interests regarding British culture .

  • Hi, I've highlighted some things, eiher spelling errors or wording that seems to me unnecesary.
  • Last time, you told me that you would like to have a time to learn more about British culture through this class .
  • And you suggested that you make a group presenation with the topic of your interests regarding British culture .
  • so have you diceded about the partners you are going to work with and the topics that you will discuss through your presentation ?
  • Clive
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Hi,

I've highlighted some things, eiher spelling errors or wording that seems to me unnecesary.

Last time, you told me that you would like to have a time to learn more about British culture through this class. And you suggested that you make a group presenation with the topic of your interests regarding British culture. ... so have you diceded
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Thanks a lot, buy the way, some people suggested me that I should use have the time instead of have a time. What do you think?
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Hi,

Yes, that would be better. Or 'some time'.

Clive

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