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Osmancataloluk Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Dear teachers would it be possible to correct my paragraph, regards

We turned back to our home after the fruitful and profitable chat with Fatma. She was scared so much of my mother, she thought that my mother was a person who got into contact with the beings that were not belonged to this world. As far as my mother is the object of such unusual things, she should not be denied with her claims at least. But the thing she doesn’t know was that my mother doesn’t have such a capacity or earned it via some kind of education; it is because of her faith which would earn her such rewards.
  

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osmancataloluk she thought that my mother was a person who got into contact with the beings that were not belonged to this world. The meaning of this is unclear. You should explain it.

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  • osmancataloluk she thought that my mother was a person who got into contact with the beings that were not belonged to this world.
  • The meaning of this is unclear.
  • You should explain it.
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osmancatalolukshe thought that my mother was a person who got into contact with the beings that were not belonged to this world.
The meaning of this is unclear. You should explain it.
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Isn't the meaninig clear? or is the grammar is okay then?
She thought that my mother was a person who got into contact with the beings that were not belonged to this world. I mean ; "got into contact with spirits of the deads such as, saints, dead persons, prophets including christ and other angels. I meant this here.
regards
osman
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osmancatalolukIsn't the meaninig clear?
It's not.

she thought that my mother was a person who got into contact with the beings that were not belonged to this world.

You could instead write it as: she thought that my mother was a person who got in
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