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Osmancataloluk Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Dear teachers of thought, I would like you to correct me please if I am wrong with these lines. regards
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The old woman standing barely on the heap of twigs and bushes a few minutes ago was gone and now a large-bodied beast was placed in her body instead. He approached the wall, bounced self off from the heap with an unexpected agility, and jump on the wall. Upon this view, I was surprised and frightened very much. So frightened I was that I was confused and instead of running home I did just the opposite and I fled to the road with all my strength, and started running down the road through its opening to the street, I wanted to reach the bridge at the end of the street. This was the mistake I made of my life!
The old woman standing barely on the heap of twigs and bushes a few minutes ago was gone and now a large-bodied beast was placed in her body instead. He approached the wall, bounced self off from the heap with an unexpected agility, and jump on the wall. Upon this view, I was surprised and frightened very much. So frightened I was that I was confused and instead of running home I did just the opposite and I fled to the road with all my strength, and started running down the road through its opening to the street, I wanted to reach the bridge at the end of the street. This was the mistake I made of my life!
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The old woman who was standing on the heap of twigs and bushes barely a few minutes ago was gone, and now a large-bodied beast was in her place. He approached the wall, bounced itself off the heap with an unexpected agility, and jumped on the wall. Upon this view, I was surprised and frightened very much.
- The old woman who was standing on the heap of twigs and bushes barely a few minutes ago was gone, and now a large-bodied beast was in her place.
- He approached the wall, bounced itself off the heap with an unexpected agility, and jumped on the wall.
- Upon this view, I was surprised and frightened very much.
- So frightened was I that I was confused.
- Instead of running home, I did just the opposite; I fled to the road with all my strength and started running down the road through its opening to the street.
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The old woman who was standing on the heap of twigs and bushes barely a few minutes ago was gone, and now a large-bodied beast was in her place. He approached the wall, bounced itself off the heap with an unexpected agility, and jumped on the wall. Upon this view, I was surprised and frightened very much. So frightened was I that I was confused. Instead of running home, I did just the opposite; I
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