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Arif Orçun Şeker Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

DEAR TEACHERS, I NEED YOUR HELP

Hello all

"the attached price list will be only valid on condition that the payment is to be done in May 2016"

Is the above sentence grammatically right ?

Thank you in advance
  

Top answer

".. " Is better.

  • "..
  • " Is better.
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3 Answers
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".. will only be valid on condition that payment is made during May 2016." Is better.
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Yes, but it is unnecessarily verbose. Business communications must be short and clear to avoid confusion.

The prices in the attached list are valid for purchases and payments made in May 2016.
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that was a really fast reply. Thank you very much

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