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Help Wanted Posted 22 years ago
Grammar
Dear teachers, I need help with proof-reading
Q: Would you like to be as clever as Leonardo da Vinci? Why or Why not?
A: No, I would not because so many people would make me help them do many things, so I would be very busy and would not have any free time.
Could any teachers here help check if the answer is grammatically correct? Many thanks for helping!
A: No, I would not because so many people would make me help them do many things, so I would be very busy and would not have any free time.
Could any teachers here help check if the answer is grammatically correct? Many thanks for helping!
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gosh - that is a long verb string! I dont think what you've said is wrong, but I also dont think it is very idiomatic. There are a number of ways that this could be expressed, hopefully others will also offer you their ideas.
- gosh - that is a long verb string!
- I dont think what you've said is wrong, but I also dont think it is very idiomatic.
- There are a number of ways that this could be expressed, hopefully others will also offer you their ideas.
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gosh - that is a long verb string! I dont think what you've said is wrong, but I also dont think it is very idiomatic.
There are a number of ways that this could be expressed, hopefully others will also offer you their ideas.
If I was writing the same idea:
"because so many ppl would want me to help them to do different things that I would be too busy to have any fre
There are a number of ways that this could be expressed, hopefully others will also offer you their ideas.
If I was writing the same idea:
"because so many ppl would want me to help them to do different things that I would be too busy to have any fre
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