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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
(Images of the bar chart is below comment)
Here is my answer :
The given bar chart gives infomation about the proportion of wonmen and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test during a 30-year period, starting from 1980.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that the percentage of women passing their driving test was higher than the percentage of men passing their driving test from 1980 to 2010.
In terms of the the rate of females passing their driving test in one Asian country increased rapidly from nearly 48 percent in 1980 to reach a peak of 68 percent in 2000, before fell slowly 64 percent in 2010.
It is really obvious that there was a quick rise in the proportion of males who achieved their driving test from around 28 percent in 1980 to reach a peak of nearly 59 percent in 2000. After that it stay steadily around 59 percent of driving test passed until 2010.
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