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Hampeh Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

Dear teachers and friends,

0Dear teachers and friends,02br
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00 Here is the situation. Kindly please review my writing. Your kind assistance would be very much appreciated.02br
00A couple of months ago, John turn down job offer from company A because at the same time, he also had another offer from company B. After considering both companies, John decided to work at company B. however, after 2 months working there, John found that the job is boring and didn’t match with his experience. Write a letter to company A asking whether they still can accept you there. Ask about the salary rising too.02br
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00Accept offer as Engineer at company A12br
10Dear Michael, 12br
10The above matter is referred. Thank you for your kindness to offer me a job as Engineer at company A two months ago. After considering your offer carefully, I decided to accept the job.12br
10As per our conversation with Lisa, she told me that my salary would be USD 2000. I’d be very much appreciated if you can raise the salary up to USD 3000.12br
10Your kind consideration would be very much appreciated.12br
10Best regards,12br
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10John12br
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10Any better ideas, any comment? Thank you guys.12br
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Top answer

02br 00You need to start again with more humility. You have refused a job offer but now want a second chance. 0-

  • 02br 00You need to start again with more humility.
  • You have refused a job offer but now want a second chance.
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00You need to start again with more humility. You have refused a job offer but now want a second chance. Apologize, explain the situation as best you can, and I don't think you should niggle about salary, even if it is required by the assignment.0-
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0Dear Mr Mister Micawber, 02br
00Thanks for your advice. I really appreciate that. When I asked my ex-boss, he also told me the same thing. It’s a huge mistake by choosing the current work while I turn down the better offer. Sometimes we made a mistake, and I should learn from that. I found out from the internal staff, they still lack of staff. That’s why I think that I still h
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0Ah, forgot to state the reasons why I want to re-consider that offer02br
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00The reasons why I re-consider the offer are02br
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001.00 00The new job that I take is not match with my experience02br
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002.00 00The environment is boring, not as expected02br
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003.00 00The boss is ri
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00Subject:01b00 Reapplication for position of02b00 Engineer at Company A02br
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00Dear 01b00Mr [Surname]02b00, [01i00You may use the first name only if you are close friends02i00.] 02br
00Thank you for your kindness01b00 in offering me the position of 02b
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0Thanks Mr. Mister Micawber.for your prompt reply.02br
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00I just have a few questions.02br
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00“01font00that commitment is now at an end02font00” – Correct me if I’m wrong. That sounds like I’m doing some contractual job. Actually, it’s permanent and I will only leave the current company if I got the wr
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01font10that commitment is now at an end12br
11span10A little stretching of the truth, Hampeh-- a white lie.12br
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