0
Khang trần anh Posted 8 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Dear teacher, this essay is about success and luck

Please help me with this essay

Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


While nobody can deny the usefulness of luck , personally , I completely agree that luck is very importance to gain their target .Because I think luck in here is meeting the right person at right time and grabbing the right opportunities.
Role of relationship in success is very importance. If one day you need to be helped, you will find somebody who you had met before .And one in the whole maybe be your hero.That illustrate the luck in meeting the right person at right time .
As you see, the synonym of opportunity is lucky chance .That why opportunities is apart of luck.In addition, opportunities always knocks the door only once.But good opportunities are on the way for lucky person.In the way to success , you have to grab all the opportunities to excel in life and prove you are worth of the luck.So , sometime success in here is just grabbing the right lucky chance .

In conclusion,it seems to me that luck in life is always uncontrollable.It also unpredictable.All we have to do is trying hard and trying to become lucky.A successful man/woman is always unmeasurable and finding the best thing to be more successful.

  

Top answer

You have a lot of spacing errors. While nobody can deny the usefulness of luc k , personall y , I completely agree that luck is very importance (wrong form) to gain their targe t . B ecause I think luck in here is meeting the right person at right time and grabbing the right opportunities.

  • You have a lot of spacing errors.
  • While nobody can deny the usefulness of luc k , personall y , I completely agree that luck is very importance (wrong form) to gain their targe t .
  • B ecause I think luck in here is meeting the right person at right time and grabbing the right opportunities.
  • (fragment, incomplete sentence) (missing word) Role of relationship in success is very importance .
  • T hat illustrate (wrong form) the luck in meeting the right person at right tim e .
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0

You have a lot of spacing errors.


While nobody can deny the usefulness of luck , personally , I completely agree that luck is very importance (wrong form) to gain their targe

Related Questions