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Prabashi Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Dear Teacher, please review my sentence and punctuation to correct. Thanks,

Today, my mind cannot recall how we gradually became closer to each other; only I can surprise to think for her greatness.
  

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Hi, Today, my mind cannot recall how we gradually became closer to each other; only I can surprise to think for her greatness. The part in bold does not make sense. You need to say it in some other way.

— Clive

  • Hi, Today, my mind cannot recall how we gradually became closer to each other; only I can surprise to think for her greatness.
  • The part in bold does not make sense.
  • You need to say it in some other way.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,
Today, my mind cannot recall how we gradually became closer to each other; only I can surprise to think for her greatness.

The part in bold does not make sense. You need to say it in some other way.

Best wishes, Clive
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CliveHi,
Today, my mind cannot recall how we gradually became closer to each other; only I can surprise to think for her greatness.

The part in bold does not make sense. You need to say it in some other way.

Best wishes, Clive

Thanks Clive for your advice. So can I say like this?

Today, my mind cannot recall ho
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Hi,
can I say like this?
Today, my mind cannot recall how we gradually became closer to each other but only the reason that she was an artist of true love.

It's much better. But the phrase 'an artist of true love' is a little unclear. Say this part another way.

eg an artist with love in her heart

eg a dedicated artist

eg someone who loved her art
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