Dear teacher, please help me with this IELTS Writing task 2-Migration.

Dear teacher, please help me with this IELTS Writing task 2-Migration.

More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

Nowadays, there are a lot of people tend to migrate to cities to find a new life. However, the new life in the city can make people face many difficulties. Therefore, governments should improve urban life better for every people.

In modern life, many people want to move to cities to live rather than live in rural because life in the cities is growing and people in cities are living in modern life. For example, people who live in cities enjoy the many benefits that cities offer, such as a high-security system, modern public transport, good education system,… However, life in urban can make many people face many difficulties. For example, people who move to the urban have to pay many prices more than people who live in the rural such as cost of living, transport, and food. Moreover, there are many factories are more and more development in the cities. That makes the urban have more pollution than in the countryside. Besides, in the cities usually, face the traffic jam because the life of the urban is busier.

In my opinion, governments should have any solution to improve life in urban. Firstly, the State should revise the cost of living, transport, food, and tax because it makes people’s lives easier. Secondly, politicians need to control the transportation in the city and encourage the population to choose public transport to improve transport in the urban. Moreover, that can make urban reduce pollution and congestion in the city. Finally, governments need to control factories in cities and have strict sanctions for the enterprise which violating environmental protection policies.

In conclusion, people who live in the countryside tend to migrate to urban to find a better life. Therefore, governments should support people to make people live happier in that city.