Dear teacher, please help me take a look at this essay about culture

People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Every country has its own cultural features, it’s definitely true that immigrants should catch up with various customs and behaviors while initially living abroad.

There are many troubles that may surprisingly appear when we begin to be alive face to face in unaccustomed places. Any strange behaviors that wouldn’t be mercy and might be considered impolite in specific circumstances. For instance, Indian tend to shake their head when they choose the right answer and vice versa.

In term of getting on well with new customs and traditions doesn’t mean losing your culture identity, but any norms of social behavior are a few basic platforms to connect people together. Importantly, we might get involved in illegal activities when someone tries to harm ourselves for being interested if our brains lack of misunderstanding social standards.

Besides that, immigrants are able to build more new social relationships in need when one’s company gets his or her own issue even works or outside.

Eventually, I totally agree that we should have been an impact on the local customs and traditions rather than forever and one. Whenever we adapt to others conditions of living, and then blend into social communities.