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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Dear school
i hope all is well over there, i just want to jnow if i qualify to be your student in this year jamb were i scored 211 and i am combinig my result (waec and neco)please i need your help urgent and what is the amount of money to be paid for the admission my course is accounting
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Hi, Some comments. This is all just one long run-on' semnetnce, ie several sentences squeezed into one incorrectly. Add capitals and punctuation, or they will think your English is appalling.
- Hi, Some comments.
- This is all just one long run-on' semnetnce, ie several sentences squeezed into one incorrectly.
- Add capitals and punctuation, or they will think your English is appalling.
- Instead of 'Dear School', say "Dear Sir', or find the person's name.
- i hope all is well over there, Don't say this.
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Hi,
Some comments.
This is all just one long run-on' semnetnce, ie several sentences squeezed into one incorrectly.
Add capitals and punctuation, or they will think your English is appalling.
Some comments.
This is all just one long run-on' semnetnce, ie several sentences squeezed into one incorrectly.
Add capitals and punctuation, or they will think your English is appalling.
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