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Dear Colleagues,
I am pleased to announce regarding our new colleague, Farah l, who is join with us in Insurance Department as Insurance administrator, 11th August 2013, Please join with me in welcoming Farah to the XXXX Team and request to each of you to extend to her our usual support.
  

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Anonymous Dear Colleagues,I am pleased to announce regarding introduce our new colleague, Farah l, who is join ing with us in the Insurance Department as Insurance administrator, as of 11th August 2013 . Please join with me in welcoming Farah to the XXXX Team and as I request to each of you to extend to her our usual support. I hope this is all clear.

  • Anonymous Dear Colleagues,I am pleased to announce regarding introduce our new colleague, Farah l, who is join ing with us in the Insurance Department as Insurance administrator, as of 11th August 2013 .
  • Please join with me in welcoming Farah to the XXXX Team and as I request to each of you to extend to her our usual support.
  • I hope this is all clear.
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Anonymous Dear Colleagues,I am pleased to announce regarding introduce our new colleague, Farah l, who is joining with us in the Insurance Department as Insurance administrator, as of

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