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Osmancataloluk Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Dear Mentors, Thanks for every thing so far, and I would like you to take a look at my description of a place, regards

Description of the district where an old mosque placed
It was already after the midday; the mild autumn sun was already past the middle of the day and moving toward the west. After the chat, children went their homes. I stood by the mulberry alone in the middle of the neighborhood. I didn't want to go home. But where else could I go? What would I do at home, nothing but stay in the courtyard. I started walking slowly across the game field with boredom. Across the field, in the southwest end of the game field settled The Mosque Ascetics by the left side of the road turning aside from Sarayduzu Street and slanting down mildly to enter the game field of The neighborhood of Ascetics. I was slowly and unwittingly walking up the Çilehane Mosque. But actually I didn't know where I was heading, so the path was taking me to the mosque. This mosque was built in 1430 A.D. by Mehmet Pasha, the Ascetic during the Ottoman period. Entering from the east, through the main gate into the garden where the mosque located on the left side in the front close to the road, and in the western side of the garden a lodge, a fauntain and shrines would welcome you. To the west of the garden, placed the stairs leading the way out of the mosque for some 40 stairs. With these stairs unused backyard at the back of the mosque should be reached. Actually, this was a terrace and its level would rise almost up to the dome of the mosque. While there was no worshipping here at this time of the day it became a very quiet and isolated area that nobody would even come or pass. I was right at the beginning of the stairs and I made my way up. Wide stone steps of the staircase must have been damaged and worn out from the fatigue of centuries passed.
  

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osmancataloluk I stood by the mulberry This is a mulberry Do you mean a mulberry tree ?

  • osmancataloluk I stood by the mulberry This is a mulberry Do you mean a mulberry tree ?
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osmancatalolukI stood by the mulberry
This is a mulberry
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Yes I mean the mulberry tree my mentor
thanks
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In that case, you should write that as: I stood by the mulberry tree.
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Thanks a lot my mentor,
Other than mulberry tree, is there no mistake in the paragraph? Can I take this as is?
thanks and
regards
osman
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osmancatalolukIt was already after the midday;
It was already after midday;
osmancatalolukthe mild autumn sun was already past the middle of the da
What does this mean?
osmancatalolukand moving toward the west.
and moving west.
osmancatalolukch
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Thanks a lot Dear Teacher,
I tried to describe the sun in Autumn which is as not hot as in July, with the adjective "mild." Then I described the time of the day which is almost one and a half hour before sun set.
I tried something nice but I couldn't do it. Sorry for that
regards
osman

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