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Osmancataloluk Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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At that very moment, the hen at which a stone I threw hit frightened and flew right back into its owner's garden in scream. The old hag upon hearing the sound of her hen got crazy. By shouting, and cursing me, walked toward the pile of rubble at the corner of the garden. It was obvious that he would try to climb the rubble then to the top of wall. She would try to get revenge because she thought that I harmed her hen. Whereas the hen itself was as annoying as its owner of old witch.
  

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) At that very moment, the hen that I had thrown a stone at and hit, squawked and flew back into it's owner's garden. The old hag, upon hearing the sound of her hen, threw a fit. Shouting and cursing at me, she walked toward the pile of rubble at the corner of the garden.

  • ) At that very moment, the hen that I had thrown a stone at and hit, squawked and flew back into it's owner's garden.
  • The old hag, upon hearing the sound of her hen, threw a fit.
  • Shouting and cursing at me, she walked toward the pile of rubble at the corner of the garden.
  • It was obvious that she would try to climb the rubble and get to the top of the wall.
  • She was set on taking revenge on me for hitting her hen.
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(The following revision if based on US usage.)

At that very moment, the hen that I had thrown a stone at and hit, squawked and flew back into it's owner's garden. The old hag, upon hearing the sound of her hen, threw a fit. Shouting and cursing at me, she walked toward the pile of rubble at the corner of the garden. It was obvious that she would try to climb the rubble and get to the t

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