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Mohsin123 Posted 10 years ago
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Dear Members...Please review my Motivation Letter

Motivation Letter

Muhammad Mohsin
Pakistan (Jhelum)
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Nov 2016
Admission office Politecnico di Milano
Dear Sir, Madam
I am interested to apply for a Master of Engineering in Automation and Control starting in Sep 2017.I graduated in 2014 from Federal Urdu University arts Science and Technology Islamabad(Pakistan) and hold a Bachelor degree in Electrical(Electronics) engineering.
I have learned about basic engineering principles at Bachelor level. During my degree I do academic internships by knowing that how theoretical study implemented in field.
After completion my study I have done some experience in Electrical and Instrumentation in order to explore myself for further improvements.
During experience I found alot of instruments their control it was so pretty. I realize about automation and control advancement and built more interest in it.
My latest working as Internee Engineer in Fertilizer Industry was really good and turning point for me.I have learnt as much as possible during my internship.
One day when I questioned to my boss?
We are working here in fully well designed plant and feeling champions.
But I said those who designed it are real champions. The answer was Italian are those one who designed it.
From that day I realize about those who designed and installed it in 1978 century now have more advancement in technology.

It was enough for my inspiration& motivation.After getting broad exposure about industrial automation along with general overview I decide that I should do specialized degree in this field in order to become more familiar with innovative technologies.

When I return back to home after completion my internship I talk to my father for financial support by explaining my future vision they allowed me.I feel fine and say thanks to my father.
Later I search about Italy Engineering Universities and found that Politecnico di Milano is best one for Automation and Control Engineering.

So now I intend to pursue my higher study in popular University Politecnico di Milano.Its one of the best university in Italy also competing with world higher ranked universities that ensures the high standard of education.
The advance study In Automation and Control Engineering with emphasis in innovative technology focusing on research, design and implementation. Politecnico di Milano university best suits me because it offers many courses that are specifically related to area of my interest i.e.
• Advance and Multivariable control
• Dynamics of Electrical Machines and drives
• Computer Aided Manufacturing
• Software Engineering for(Automation)
• Electronics Systems
• Advance process control
• Advance measurement systems for control applications
• Power Electronics
Also instructions of lectures in English language. It will be helpful for me to develop post-graduation work and learn from professors with grate experience in theory and practice.
The achieved study patterns and methods provided by Politecnico di Milano the undoubtedly knowledgeable which will help me to develop my previous academic standards of engineering degree.
I hope this department is a useful addition to my current education that I can use for my professional career as Automation and Control engineer.
This department will definitely increase my opportunities to get good job after completion my study.
Today industry control entirely open, close loop feedback and PID control systems for operating equipment such as machinery, processes in factories, boilers and heat treating ovens, switching on telephone networks, steering and stabilization of ships, aircraft and other applications with minimal or reduced human intervention.
I believe obtaining a Master's Degree will provide the necessary background for me to be to anticipate and react to ever-changing environments in technology.

It’s my pleasure if I can engage myself and ability to achieve knowledge from Italian University.I am confident enough that I could be able to accomplish higher study in the proposed field that will contributes to my future professional interest as well as to the society as a whole. I firmly believe that if I could get a chance to cultivate my potentiality in Politecnico di Milano that will definitely satisfy my thirst for higher study and it’s a unique opportunity for me to get such kind of offer from modern country like Italy.
Hopefully I will avail good environment of study along with beautiful atmosphere during my two year study program.
I believe that as a holder of Bachelor Degree in Electrical (Electronics) Engineering course description being very close major to Automation Engineering with a little experience in Pakistan.I have the capability and potential to fulfill this Master degree program and am confident that I could be an active, open-minded and useful student in this program.
Thank you for reviewing my application, and I look forward to your acceptance.

Yours truly,

Muhammad Mohsin
  

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