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Summersnow69 Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Dear members, i need some help with my grammar

Dear members,
i need some help . i hope u all can review and edit a few sentence on my application essay, on the grammar and the sentence structure, and vocabulary.


----When I was eight, most of my leisure time was spent gluing my eyes on the tv screen watching Disney’s magical series, “Gummi Bear”.

o Do i sound chilidish??

THANKS IN ADVANCE for you reading.
  

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Hi, Welcome to the Forum. Yes, I'm afraid you do, in my opinion. Best wishes, Clive

  • Hi, Welcome to the Forum.
  • Yes, I'm afraid you do, in my opinion.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

Welcome to the Forum.

Yes, I'm afraid you do, in my opinion.

Best wishes, Clive

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