Dear members, i need some help . i hope u all can review and edit a few sentence on my application essay, on the grammar and the sentence structure, and vocabulary.
----When I was eight, most of my leisure time was spent gluing my eyes on the tv screen watching Disney’s magical series, “Gummi Bear”.
o Do i sound chilidish??
THANKS IN ADVANCE for you reading.
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Hi, Welcome to the Forum. Yes, I'm afraid you do, in my opinion. Best wishes, Clive
— Clive
Hi, Welcome to the Forum.
Yes, I'm afraid you do, in my opinion.
Best wishes, Clive
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