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Luve Posted 22 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Dear Julielai/ Mountainhiker,

Dear Julielai/ Mountainhaiker,
You could please review these paragraph as appropriate.

Thanks in advance.


1. Bad news spreads faster and further than good news. Generally, people made mistakes fewer than achievements. They did care and tried to avoid but enjoy listen to other bad news. In addition, in order to deal with unhappy customers, companies should write a letter that explained all situations and problems with gifts or benefits to their customers.

2. I will vote against the company that announces directly, either good or bad news, to their employees. Workers may get less motivated, misunderstanding among employees that are mainly reason cause to slow down the progression in their company.

3. Indirect message delivery is a good choice over the direct method. However, in some cases, i prefer to communicate in a direct way which fit me the best. For example, if you angry or willing to deliver a bad news to someone, put it in a writing seems not an effective way. Face-to-face or direct message is a better choice.

4. United States companies were reluctant to say sorry to comsumers compare to the Japaneses. The main reason is United States companies often delivering letters that explained their customer of problems that disappointed or destroyed their feeling. Apology should have been made whenever products or services that companies provided affect or impact in many ways to customer. Apology letters could be send to customer if companies willing to communicate in a long term relationship with their important customers.
  

Top answer

Hello Luve I'm helping out MH and Julielai here, as they've quite a lot of posts to deal with. I hope you don't mind. Anyway, this is my suggested text.

  • Hello Luve I'm helping out MH and Julielai here, as they've quite a lot of posts to deal with.
  • I hope you don't mind.
  • Anyway, this is my suggested text.
  • In some places, I'm not quite certain of your original meaning, so have had to guess (especially in the sentences in square brackets).
  • Let me know if I've misunderstood!
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Hello Luve

I'm helping out MH and Julielai here, as they've quite a lot of posts to deal with. I hope you don't mind. Anyway, this is my suggested text. In some places, I'm not quite certain of your original meaning, so have had to guess (especially in the sentences in square brackets). Let me know if I've misunderstood!

1. Bad news spreads faster and further than good news.
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What can I add? MrP is great as usual!

#2: hmmm . . . when company heads don't announce the news, rumors circulate.
Just my 2 cents.
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Here is the last revise. I want a final comment from you guy.
Thanks in advance.


1.Bad news spreads faster and further than good news. Generally, people got things right more often than they got things wrong. They take care to get things right themselves, and try to avoid mistakes, but they do enjoy listening to other people's bad news. When dealing with unhappy customers, co
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MrPedantic,
I'm helping out MH and Julielai here, as they've quite a lot of posts to deal with.


Thank you!

MountainHiker
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Hello Luve

I've made a few changes, in bold, which I hope will help:

1.Bad news spreads faster and further than good news. Generally, people get things right more often than they get things wrong. They take care to get things right themselves, and try to avoid mistakes, but they do enjoy listening to other people's bad news. When dealing with unhappy customers, c
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Thanks so much and hope you will also help me with these paragraphs...



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Hello L.

There were some passages I didn't quite understand, but I've done my best. You may find you get a quicker response to your posts if you post smaller pieces of text at intervals, as people generally will be happier to check a short extract.

Good luck with the report!

MrP


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