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BW2/3 Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Dear Heavenly fahter.

Dear Hevenly father, ( should father be captialize?)

I am guility of many things. I go to church every Sunday. It is not that I want to get one step closer to you but I want to socalize and meet girls.

Is this sentence OK?

Thank you
  

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I am guilty of many things. I go to church every Sunday. It is not that I want to get one step closer to you , but I want to socialize and meet girls.

— Marius Hancu

  • I am guilty of many things.
  • I go to church every Sunday.
  • It is not that I want to get one step closer to you , but I want to socialize and meet girls.
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I am guilty of many things. I go to church every Sunday. It is not
that I want to get one step closer to you, but I want to socialize and
meet girls.
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I believe Father should be capitalized, yes. Heavenly Father. Some people will capitalize the You as well.
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Hi guys.,

I have another comment. You need similar grammar before and after the 'but':

It is not that I want to get one step closer to you, but that I want to socialize and meet girls.

Best wishes, Clive
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