Dear Experts ! I need your help here. Please correct this paragraph below, its a kind of urgent, !

I don’t need to explain more that Internet is a part of our daily life. We can imagine the rapid development of internet services from B&W era to the modern world. Those were the days we have had the dialup internet with a limited access and the slow speed comparing the high speed broadband today. There are lots of countries that they are still beyond the proper usage of highspeed Internet Services one of them is Nepal.
Nepal does not hold a long history in Internet it’s been a couple of years that the high speed broadband internet takes it height in the Nepalese Market. Poor thing is that its expected growth is not that much satisfactory then the way it should be.
According to report of Nepal Telecom Authority (NTA) there are only 25% market penetrations in terms of high speed broadband users in Nepal if we consider the services like 3G or GPRS provided by local telco operators. On the other hand there are more than 45 registered Internet service providers in Nepal providing the internet services according to their capacity and coverage, and somewhere we have heard that Internet business is already on saturation point. The current trend shows that large players in market are only focusing the corporate sectors than the retail users. We are getting lots of grievances and complaints from retail users regarding the services they get at their end comparing the corporate sectors.
The secondary fact is that market players are not focusing their services outside the Kathmandu valley. Because high-tech needs a huge investment which generates the low revenue that’s why there is a high risk factor. Besides that the regulatory body (NTA) has not a strong policy which empowers the service providers to expand their services beyond city areas.
Considering points above what are the factors that cause to deliver the high speed broadband internet towards the retail users and we can maximize the current market penetration up to more than ninety percent. What are the step that has to be taken by private sector and government sector both to meet the demand of “ Highspeed Internet For Everyone”