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Mizanur Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Dear Altruist, I need help in correcting grammar mistake for following cover letter:

I need your help to fix the grammar error. I will appreciate if you provide any other suggestion regarding formation and structure. Thanks.

"I am writing to express my interest for the full-time lecturer position in Government and Politics at the Political science department under the school of Social Sciences. I am presently working as a lecturer (part-time) at ABC University at the Department of Political Science. I would like to take the opportunity to turn my position into full-time position.

I completed my bachelor in Social Sciences (BSS) and Master of Social Sciences (MSS) Degree. I also completed ‘Master of Philosophy’ in Public Administration from Department of Administration and Organization Theory, RCU University. I was awarded grade A (highest academic grade in Norwegian education system) for my thesis (thesis credits: 60). The department has different research groups. My thesis was conducted under ‘Globalization and Development’ research group. I am conscious that good grades, though important, are not the only indicator of one’s potential as an instructor and facilitator. I have also been involved in various voluntary activities and extra-curricular activities in home country and in abroad.

Apart from teaching experience, I have two years’ experience in different positions including large national and multinational corporations. My varied job experiences played a vital role to enhance my communication and networking skills. I have gained many transferable skills from different job experience. This might give me additional advantages while I will be dealing with the students in explaining different issues. My last research degree ignited the interest in teaching profession. The interest is blossomed by dint of getting in touch with some wonderful teachers. Their enlightened life style and creativity impressed me so much.

In addition, my experience at ABC University inspires me more to pursue academic career. I already received summer semester’s ’Teaching Evaluation Report’ by students. I had taken two sections, where students from two separate sections marked me on my capacity as an instructor and I am glad to announce that I received ‘Very good’ and ‘excellent’, respectively, in evaluation report by students. I am really overwhelmed by receiving stimulating comments in my teaching evaluation and it made me feel blessed. It is such an encouragement for me that validated my decision of joining the teaching profession. I have been taking course on POL101. In addition to Pol101, I can teach Pol102 and other related courses as per needs of the department.

I have grown a strong passion to enlighten the young minds, who are going to be the future architects of our nation and of the world. I eagerly want to build career in teaching profession in a respected academic institution like ABC University. "
  

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Mizanur I need your help to fix the grammar error. Which one? Mizanur I would appreciate it if you provide any other suggestion s regarding formation and structure.

  • Mizanur I need your help to fix the grammar error.
  • Which one?
  • Mizanur I would appreciate it if you provide any other suggestion s regarding formation and structure.
  • Thanks.
  • I am writing to express my interest for the full-time lecturer position in Government and Politics in the Political science department under the school of Social Sciences.
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MizanurI need your help to fix the grammar error.
Which one?
Mizanur I would appreciate it if you provide any other suggestions regarding formation and structure. Thanks.
I am writing to express my interest for the full-time lecturer position in Government and Politics in the Political science dep
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Actually, both. The grammatically error has already been fixed with your kind assistance.
I am ready to modify it if you get any suggestion from you.
Thank you so much Alpheeca Stars
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Dear Alphecca Stars, you helped me a lot before. so here i am asking for another one if you able to manage the time.

I have written a letter of intent and answered few questions as a part of application for an advanced master degree programme. I would be grateful if you your help in correcting grammar and sentence formation. The essay and the questions answer are quite long, so I have me
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1. My interest in policy-related issues blossomed during the final years of my undergraduate studies and it intensifies day by day. (That seems like hyperbole.) Hence, I am applying for abc programme. I have always wanted to do research on and work with transnational organizations, multilateral organizations and civil socie
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Hello Alphecca Stars,
Cordially asking your kind help in correcting following sentences in terms of grammar and sentence formulation

1. I am strongly convinced that my scholastic background would help me to achieve my future career goal which is working and doing research on the nonprofit organization. I am now devoted to teaching profession and currently teaching at a University in
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1. I am strongly convinced that my scholastic background will would help me to achieve my future career goal which is working and doing research on the nonprofit organizations. I am now devoted to the teaching profession and currently teaching at a university in Bangladesh. I am a the person who loves to be a part of various organ

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