Dear Altruist, I need help in correcting grammar mistake for following cover letter:

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I need your help to fix the grammar error. I will appreciate if you provide any other suggestion regarding formation and structure. Thanks.

"I am writing to express my interest for the full-time lecturer position in Government and Politics at the Political science department under the school of Social Sciences. I am presently working as a lecturer (part-time) at ABC University at the Department of Political Science. I would like to take the opportunity to turn my position into full-time position.

I completed my bachelor in Social Sciences (BSS) and Master of Social Sciences (MSS) Degree. I also completed ‘Master of Philosophy’ in Public Administration from Department of Administration and Organization Theory, RCU University. I was awarded grade A (highest academic grade in Norwegian education system) for my thesis (thesis credits: 60). The department has different research groups. My thesis was conducted under ‘Globalization and Development’ research group. I am conscious that good grades, though important, are not the only indicator of one’s potential as an instructor and facilitator. I have also been involved in various voluntary activities and extra-curricular activities in home country and in abroad.

Apart from teaching experience, I have two years’ experience in different positions including large national and multinational corporations. My varied job experiences played a vital role to enhance my communication and networking skills. I have gained many transferable skills from different job experience. This might give me additional advantages while I will be dealing with the students in explaining different issues. My last research degree ignited the interest in teaching profession. The interest is blossomed by dint of getting in touch with some wonderful teachers. Their enlightened life style and creativity impressed me so much.

In addition, my experience at ABC University inspires me more to pursue academic career. I already received summer semester’s ’Teaching Evaluation Report’ by students. I had taken two sections, where students from two separate sections marked me on my capacity as an instructor and I am glad to announce that I received ‘Very good’ and ‘excellent’, respectively, in evaluation report by students. I am really overwhelmed by receiving stimulating comments in my teaching evaluation and it made me feel blessed. It is such an encouragement for me that validated my decision of joining the teaching profession. I have been taking course on POL101. In addition to Pol101, I can teach Pol102 and other related courses as per needs of the department.

I have grown a strong passion to enlighten the young minds, who are going to be the future architects of our nation and of the world. I eagerly want to build career in teaching profession in a respected academic institution like ABC University. "

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

MizanurI need your help to fix the grammar error.

Which one?

Mizanur I would appreciate it if you provide any other suggestions regarding formation and structure. Thanks.

I am writing to express my interest for the full-time lecturer position in Government and Politics in the Political science department under the school of Social Sciences. I am presently working as a lecturer (part-time) at ABC University in the Department of Political Science. I would like to take the opportunity to turn my position into a full-time position.

I completed my bachelor in Social Sciences (BSS) and Master of Social Sciences (MSS) Degrees. I also completed a ‘Master of Philosophy’ in Public Administration from the Department of Administration and Organization Theory, RCU University. I was awarded the grade A (the highest academic grade in the Norwegian education system) for my thesis (thesis credits: 60). The department has different research groups. My thesis was conducted under the Globalization and Development research group. I am conscious that good grades, though important, are not the only indicator of one’s potential as an instructor and facilitator. I have also been involved in various volunteer activities and extra-curricular activities in my home country and in abroad.

Apart from teaching experience, I have two years’ experience in different positions ~~including~~ in large national and multinational corporations. My varied job experiences played a vital role in enhancing my communication and networking skills. I have gained many transferable skills from different job experiences. This might give me additional advantages when ~~while~~ I will be dealing with the students in explaining different issues. My last research degree ignited my interest in the teaching profession. The interest has blossomed by dint of getting in touch with some wonderful teachers. Their enlightened life style and creativity impressed me so much.

In addition, my experience at ABC University inspires me more to pursue an academic career. I already received the summer semester’s ’Teaching Evaluation Report’ by students. I had taken two sections, and the ~~where~~ students from these ~~two separate~~ sections marked me on my capacity as an instructor. ~~and~~ I am glad to announce that I received ‘Very good’ and ‘excellent’ evaluations. ~~, respectively, in evaluation report by students~~. I am really overwhelmed by ~~receiving~~ their stimulating comments ~~in my teaching evaluation~~ and it made me feel blessed. It is such an encouragement for me that validated my decision of joining the teaching profession. I have been teaching ~~taking course on~~ POL101. In addition to Pol101, I can teach Pol102 and other related courses as per the needs of the department.

I have grown a strong passion to enlighten the young minds, who are going to be the future architects of our nation and of the world. I eagerly want to build a career in the teaching profession in a respected academic institution like ABC University.

Mizanur · Answer

Actually, both. The grammatically error has already been fixed with your kind assistance.
I am ready to modify it if you get any suggestion from you.
Thank you so much Alpheeca Stars

Mizanur · Answer

Dear Alphecca Stars, you helped me a lot before. so here i am asking for another one if you able to manage the time.

I have written a letter of intent and answered few questions as a part of application for an advanced master degree programme. I would be grateful if you your help in correcting grammar and sentence formation. The essay and the questions answer are quite long, so I have mentioned only the selected paras I have confusion in terms of grammar and sentence formation. I will highly appreciate if you got any other suggestions.

1. My interest in policy related issues blossomed during the final years of my undergrad studies and it intensifies day by day. Hence, I am applying for abc programme. I have always wanted to do research and work on (with) transnational organizations, multilateral organizations and civil society organizations (CSOs). Based on my background and personal pursue, I am convinced that ‘track 1 (specialization in …)’ suits me well.

2. As I want to stay in academia, I got to complete a Ph.D. at some point of time to expand intellectual horizon. My present plan is to publish an article within next four to five months based on my previous dissertation. Then I will start my Master at the University of B, if I get the privilege of studying in UOB.

3. I am presently working at PSS department in Xy University. PSS Department does not offer any full fledge bachelor programme in the social sciences, rather provides different courses. Students from different faculties take these courses as a fulfillment of their total credit requirement. The department is planning to open up two bachelor degree programmes in social sciences: one in policy and another one in ..logy.

4. Therefore, in this situation, the advanced Master degree of GD from University of B will certainly increase my employability at my present university. Side by side, I will try my best to utilize the time during my study period at UOB in order to develop outstanding research and analytical skills and to distinguish potential areas of interest for a future PhD. After returning to home country, along with teaching, I will be developing my doctoral proposal and will try to make a publication on the dissertation/write up that I will have to finish at IOB.

5. I would like to apply mixed method approach in my dissertation. The plan is to apply quantitative methods along with qualitative analysis. I intend to conduct comparative studies across different regions. I might use secondary dataset along with the primary data. To process and present comparatively large data set, applying descriptive statistics is a handy option. So the essence is that descriptive statistics will be used to describe the situation. Along with descriptive statistics, qualitative analysis will be deployed to have a rigorous understanding and explanation of phenomena that will ultimately set the stage for analytic generalization.

6. I have just selected the research field broadly. I have not narrowed it down. So far I have tried to give an idea about my area of interest. I am at the very early phase of academic life, so I am still open in terms of formulating my ideas. I will narrow down my research topic for the thesis as I progress with my studies at IOB. I will finalize my thesis topic after consultation with faculties & potential supervisor, and considering the feasibility of the study and the significance of the study.

Thanks in advance.

Mizanur

AlpheccaStars · Answer

1. My interest in policy-related issues blossomed during the final years of my undergraduate studies and it intensifies day by day. (That seems like hyperbole.) Hence, I am applying for abc programme. I have always wanted to do research on and work with transnational organizations, multilateral organizations and civil society organizations (CSOs). Based on my background and personal pursuits, I am convinced that ‘track 1 (specialization in …)’ suits me well.

2. As I want to stay in academia, I got to (too informal) complete a Ph.D. at some point in time to expand my intellectual horizon. My present plan is to publish an article within the next four to five months based on my previous dissertation. Then I will start my Master's Degree at the University of B, if I get the privilege of studying in UOB.

3. I am presently working at PSS department in Xy University. PSS Department does not offer any full-fledged bachelor programme in the social sciences, rather, it provides different courses. Students from different faculties take these courses as a fulfillment of their total credit requirement. The department is planning to open up two bachelor degree programmes in social sciences: one in policy and another one in ..logy.

4. Therefore, in this situation, the advanced Master's Degree of GD from University of B will certainly increase my employability ~~at my present university~~. Side by side,(??) I will try my best to utilize the time during my study period at UOB in order to develop outstanding research and analytical skills and to distinguish potential areas of interest for a future PhD. After returning to home country, along with teaching, I will be developing my doctoral proposal and will try to make a publication on the dissertation/write up that I will have to finish at IOB.

5. I would like to apply a mixed-method approach in my dissertation. The plan is to apply quantitative methods along with qualitative analysis. I intend to conduct comparative studies across different regions. I might use a secondary dataset along with the primary data. To process and present a comparatively large data set, applying descriptive statistics is a handy option (Option to what?). So the essence is that descriptive statistics will be used to describe the situation. Along with descriptive statistics, qualitative analysis will be deployed (??) to have a rigorous understanding and explanation of phenomena that will ultimately set the stage for analytic generalization.

6. I have just selected the research field broadly. I have not narrowed it down. So far I have tried to give an idea about my area of interest. I am at the very early phase of academic life, so I am still open in terms of formulating my ideas. I will narrow down my research topic for the thesis as I progress with my studies at IOB. I will finalize my thesis topic after consultation with faculty & (too informal) potential supervisor, ~~and~~ considering the feasibility of the study and the significance of the study.

Mizanur · Answer

Hello Alphecca Stars,
Cordially asking your kind help in correcting following sentences in terms of grammar and sentence formulation

1. I am strongly convinced that my scholastic background would help me to achieve my future career goal which is working and doing research on the nonprofit organization. I am now devoted to teaching profession and currently teaching at a University in Bangladesh. I am the person who loves to be a part of various organizations. I love to work for different students run clubs that has a good match with my field like: diversity club, social entrepreneur club.

2. I would like to look at the role of the nonprofit sector in “Agenda Settings” and “Policy Formulation” of North American public policy framework. The tentative title of my proposed study is “The Engagement of Non-profit Sector in Public Policy in North America : Learning for Nonprofit Leaders of Developing Countries”

3. How Non-profit organizations do play role in the Agenda Settings and Policy Formulation’

4. What lesson developing countries’ NGOs leaders can obtain from the North American nonprofit sector in terms of agenda setting and influence public policy formulation?

5. I have gained many transferable skills from my different job experiences. As a reward for my dedication to work, I was selected from whole Bangladesh as one of fifty young professionals to participate in the ‘2nd BYL Leadership Summit

thanks a lot.

Mizanur

AlpheccaStars · Answer

1. I am strongly convinced that my scholastic background will ~~would~~ help me to achieve my future career goal which is working and doing research on ~~the~~ nonprofit organizations. I am now devoted to the teaching profession and currently teaching at a university in Bangladesh. I am a ~~the~~ person who loves to be a part of various organizations. I love to work for different student-run clubs that has a good match with my field like: diversity club, social entrepreneur club (are these proper names?).

2. I would like to look at the role of the nonprofit sector in “Agenda Settings” and “Policy Formulation” of North American public policy framework. The tentative title of my proposed study is “The Engagement of the Non-profit Sector in Public Policy in North America : Learning for Nonprofit Leaders of Developing Countries”

4. What lessons can developing countries’ NGOs leaders ~~can~~ obtain from the the North American nonprofit sector in terms of agenda setting and influence public policy formulation?

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