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Shimaahmady Posted 13 years ago
Letter Writing
dear all
dear all,
As i'm not a native English speaker, i would be grateful if u take a look at my motivation letter and help me out of that
letter of motivation
Esfahan, 20 November 2013
The Erasmus Mundus European Master in Tourism Management Program
Universities situated in Denmark, Slovenia and Spain
I got my B.A in English translation from Payame-Noor University of Esfahan,Iran.I have a big interest and passion in natural, undiscovered environment which started since seven years ago by taking part in mountain climbing teams' activities, and so I had a dream that someday I would discover more unseen sites and enjoy the beauty, and despite all the difficulties on the way, reach the unique point I've always had in my mind and introduce it to people and be a part of their leisure.
All the reasons I mentioned above made me follow my passion in a more rational and professional way. Then I started passing most of the academic courses such as: Eco-tourism at technical and vocational training organization, basic and advanced course of rock climbing, basic course of ice and snow skills and recently I succeeded to pass the course of mountaineering couch. All of these helped me to be much more successful in my career as a technical manager of the tour.
Now by continuing my education in the field of Tourism Management I am sure that my knowledge will be expanded by learning the concepts and methods and techniques in this field and also putting them in practice in a professional way.
(Despite the fact that Iran has so many tourist attractions, not so many people know about them; so I can show all the beauty of the environment not only to Iranian people but also to foreigners by being the part of this field because it makes me more powerful and logical.) I don’t know if it’s good to say this part or not!!
After finishing the course or even during studying it, I can do some research to improve the quality of tourist industry and put all my effort on being more practical to raise both economical and technical levels in my career.
So with these reasons I'm giving a try for myself to be part of this program.
Best regards
Shima Ahmadi
As i'm not a native English speaker, i would be grateful if u take a look at my motivation letter and help me out of that
letter of motivation
Esfahan, 20 November 2013
The Erasmus Mundus European Master in Tourism Management Program
Universities situated in Denmark, Slovenia and Spain
I got my B.A in English translation from Payame-Noor University of Esfahan,Iran.I have a big interest and passion in natural, undiscovered environment which started since seven years ago by taking part in mountain climbing teams' activities, and so I had a dream that someday I would discover more unseen sites and enjoy the beauty, and despite all the difficulties on the way, reach the unique point I've always had in my mind and introduce it to people and be a part of their leisure.
All the reasons I mentioned above made me follow my passion in a more rational and professional way. Then I started passing most of the academic courses such as: Eco-tourism at technical and vocational training organization, basic and advanced course of rock climbing, basic course of ice and snow skills and recently I succeeded to pass the course of mountaineering couch. All of these helped me to be much more successful in my career as a technical manager of the tour.
Now by continuing my education in the field of Tourism Management I am sure that my knowledge will be expanded by learning the concepts and methods and techniques in this field and also putting them in practice in a professional way.
(Despite the fact that Iran has so many tourist attractions, not so many people know about them; so I can show all the beauty of the environment not only to Iranian people but also to foreigners by being the part of this field because it makes me more powerful and logical.) I don’t know if it’s good to say this part or not!!
After finishing the course or even during studying it, I can do some research to improve the quality of tourist industry and put all my effort on being more practical to raise both economical and technical levels in my career.
So with these reasons I'm giving a try for myself to be part of this program.
Best regards
Shima Ahmadi
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Hi Shima; Welcome to English Forums. Remember that "I" is always capitalized, and "u" is not an English word. We like the posters when they show respect for the teachers and the language by using proper English in their postings.
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- Remember that "I" is always capitalized, and "u" is not an English word.
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- A in English (focusing on translation) from Payame-Noor University of Esfahan, Iran.
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Hi Shima;
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