The dazzling name board of the store catches the pedestrians' and commuters' attention. It pulls them to the store, where the salesmen convince them to make customers.
Is "dazzling" the correct adjective? and Please check the underlined part.
kumenglish Is "dazzling" the correct adjective? It's fine. Other options are bright, sparkling, glittering, striking, and eye-catching .
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kumenglishIs "dazzling" the correct adjective?
It's fine. Other options are bright, sparkling, glittering, striking, and eye-catching.
kumenglishwhere the salesmen convince them tomakebecome customers
You want 'become', not 'make'.
CJ