Much better! The only problem with this one is that the UK and US English examples used in Formats A, B, and C are both used in the UK and not just the USA.
Hence in the UK we can write either:
A the Fourteenth of March, 1999 or March the Fourteenth, 1999 B 14th March 1999 or March 14th, 1999 C 14 March 1999 or March 14, 1999