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ImTheWalrus Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Date suggestion
Dear All,
I am trying to set up a template message for potential customers who requested an online demo.
Therefor I want to let them suggest one or more dates convenient for them.
What I have right now is:
Although I know that I should keep it short and simple I think that this is a little to straight forward and might seem a little harsh.
Any suggestions to make this a bit more polite are appreciated.
Many thanks in advance!
Walrus
I am trying to set up a template message for potential customers who requested an online demo.
Therefor I want to let them suggest one or more dates convenient for them.
What I have right now is:
The requested online-demo will take about 30 to 60 minutes.
Please suggest a date and time convenient for you.
Although I know that I should keep it short and simple I think that this is a little to straight forward and might seem a little harsh.
Any suggestions to make this a bit more polite are appreciated.
Many thanks in advance!
Walrus
Top answer
What you have is not at all harsh or too straightforward; it has just the right tone of politeness.
- What you have is not at all harsh or too straightforward; it has just the right tone of politeness.
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What you have is not at all harsh or too straightforward; it has just the right tone of politeness.
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