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An Jiyoung Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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I wrote about a watermelon I bought yesterday in the market. Does they make a sense?
( I have a photo of a watermelon )
What does it look like? Doesn’t it look like a bomb?
It is a seedless watermelon which doesn’t have stripes on the skin. I bought it because the clerk said that it has more sugar than regular watermelon. The sugar in seeds goes to There were yellow watermelons, too. I was curious about the taste of this unusual fruit.
The taste wasn’t much greater than I expected. I will buy a regular watermelon which has white stripes on the skin and seeds in it.
I have seen a long irregular shaped watermelon in the USA, but Most of watermelon in Korea is round like a soccer ball.
Do you know how to choose a watermelon?
Follow these tips to pick the best watermelon available.
1. Look the watermelon over, choose a firm, symmetrical watermelon that is free of bruises, cuts and dents and the color of stripes on the skin is clear and bold.
2. Lift it up – the watermelon should be heavy for its size. Watermelon is 92% water, which accounts for most of its weight.
3. Turn it over – on the underside of the watermelon there should be a creamy yellow spot from where it sat on the ground and ripened in the sun.
A watermelon juice is the best cool drink in the hot summer. Have a cool summer !!
( I have a photo of a watermelon )
What does it look like? Doesn’t it look like a bomb?
It is a seedless watermelon which doesn’t have stripes on the skin. I bought it because the clerk said that it has more sugar than regular watermelon. The sugar in seeds goes to There were yellow watermelons, too. I was curious about the taste of this unusual fruit.
The taste wasn’t much greater than I expected. I will buy a regular watermelon which has white stripes on the skin and seeds in it.
I have seen a long irregular shaped watermelon in the USA, but Most of watermelon in Korea is round like a soccer ball.
Do you know how to choose a watermelon?
Follow these tips to pick the best watermelon available.
1. Look the watermelon over, choose a firm, symmetrical watermelon that is free of bruises, cuts and dents and the color of stripes on the skin is clear and bold.
2. Lift it up – the watermelon should be heavy for its size. Watermelon is 92% water, which accounts for most of its weight.
3. Turn it over – on the underside of the watermelon there should be a creamy yellow spot from where it sat on the ground and ripened in the sun.
A watermelon juice is the best cool drink in the hot summer. Have a cool summer !!
Top answer
Hi An Jiyoung, Just a few careless mistakes, I think. I highlighted them for you. What does it look like?
- Hi An Jiyoung, Just a few careless mistakes, I think.
- I highlighted them for you.
- What does it look like?
- Doesn’t it look like a bomb?
- It is a seedless watermelon which doesn’t have stripes on the skin.
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Hi An Jiyoung,
Just a few careless mistakes, I think. I highlighted them for you.
What does it look like? Doesn’t it look like a bomb?
It is a seedless watermelon which doesn’t have stripes on the skin. I bought it because the clerk said that it has more sugar (is sweeter?) than regular watermelon. The sugar in seeds goes to There were yellow watermelons,
Just a few careless mistakes, I think. I highlighted them for you.
What does it look like? Doesn’t it look like a bomb?
It is a seedless watermelon which doesn’t have stripes on the skin. I bought it because the clerk said that it has more sugar (is sweeter?) than regular watermelon. The sugar in seeds goes to There were yellow watermelons,
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