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Angliholic Posted 18 years ago
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Dark chocolate is rich in something that improves the blood flow to the

Dark chocolate is rich in something that improves the blood flow to the heart.

Dark chocolate is rich in agents that help the blood flow to the heart.

Are both of the above very natural-sounding? Thanks.
  

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Angliholic Dark chocolate is rich in something that improves the blood flow to the heart. Dark chocolate is rich in agents that help the blood flow to the heart. Are both of the above very natural-sounding?

— Philip

  • Angliholic Dark chocolate is rich in something that improves the blood flow to the heart.
  • Dark chocolate is rich in agents that help the blood flow to the heart.
  • Are both of the above very natural-sounding?
  • Thanks.
  • The second is much better because the first one with "something" makes is sound as if you have no idea what the "something" is.
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AngliholicDark chocolate is rich in something that improves the blood flow to the heart.

Dark chocolate is rich in agents that help the blood flow to the heart.

Are both of the above very natural-sounding? Thanks.
The second is much better because the first one with "something" makes is sound as if you have no idea what the "something" i
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