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park sang joonI think Persepolis is only the name to have been called for a place.Persepolis is the name given to this town, When we use the name of a town or person, we think of the town or person. The town known as Persepolis became his capital.
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park sang joonThen I was wandering why the author didn't write that Darius made his capital of Persepolis.Probably for the same reason he did not make his capital after before by during from over, under, with , etc, Persepolis.