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Teal lime Posted 7 years ago
Grammar
Dangling modifiers #2
The sentences in red contain dangling modifiers. I have rewritten them in brackets. Would you please check them? Thank you.
Sipping cocktails on the balcony, the moon looked magnificent.
(As they were sipping cocktails on the balcony, the moon looked magnificent.)
Exhausted after the long hike, the shady hammock was a welcome sight.
(As they were exhausted after the long hike, the shady hammock was a welcome sight.
Going round the bend, the peaks of the Dolomites came into view.(As we were going round the bend, the peaks of the Dolomites came into view.)Top answer
Your corrected sentences are good, though I would use nouns rather than pronouns as the subjects.
- Your corrected sentences are good, though I would use nouns rather than pronouns as the subjects.
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Your corrected sentences are good, though I would use nouns rather than pronouns as the subjects.
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