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Vsuresh Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Dangling Modifier

Hi

Please give your views.


Context: Dangling modifier

This sentence was given for rephrasing.

While watching a movie, people who talk loudly are really annoying.

I think this is all right.

While watching a movie, I find it annoying when people talk loudly.

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I want to know if this sentence is also all right.

While watching a movie, it is annoying when people talk loudly.

I think this is not acceptable, as the actor is missing.

  

Top answer

vsuresh This sentence was given for rephrasing. While watching a movie, people who talk loudly are really annoying. I think this is all right.

  • vsuresh This sentence was given for rephrasing.
  • While watching a movie, people who talk loudly are really annoying.
  • I think this is all right.
  • While watching a movie, I find it annoying when people talk loudly.
  • Yes, your rephrasing is good.
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vsuresh

This sentence was given for rephrasing.

While watching a movie, people who talk loudly are really annoying.

I think this is all right.

While watching a movie, I find it annoying when people talk loudly.

Yes, your rephrasing is good.

vsuresh

I want to know if this sentence is

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