My best friend wrote this text, is it right, please? I don´t know

Thank you very much!
DAILY ROUTINE
I get up at 5 o´clock and then I have a shower.
I have a breakfast at half past five. After breakfast I go to work.
I start work at 7 o´clock.
I have a lunch at 12 o´clock. I finish work at 15 o´clock.
After work I go home or I go shopping.
In the afternoon I make some housework at home (I washing, cleaning)
Then I read book or watch TV.
I go to bed at 22 o´clock.
MY FAVOURITE DAY
My favourite day is Saturday, because It is free day.
In the morning I get up at 8 o´clock. I make the breakfast for my family. After breakfast I go for a walk with my daughter or I go shopping. Then I make a lunch.
In the afternoon I read or relax.
In the summer I cycling with my family.
I sometimes go to a pub with my friends or I go to the cinema.
In the evening I watch TV or read book.