0
Lostris Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Daily routine and My favourite day

My best friend wrote this text, is it right, please? I don´t know Emotion: sad Thank you very much!

DAILY ROUTINE

I get up at 5 o´clock and then I have a shower.
I have a breakfast at half past five. After breakfast I go to work.
I start work at 7 o´clock.
I have a lunch at 12 o´clock. I finish work at 15 o´clock.
After work I go home or I go shopping.
In the afternoon I make some housework at home (I washing, cleaning)
Then I read book or watch TV.
I go to bed at 22 o´clock.



MY FAVOURITE DAY

My favourite day is Saturday, because It is free day.
In the morning I get up at 8 o´clock. I make the breakfast for my family. After breakfast I go for a walk with my daughter or I go shopping. Then I make a lunch.
In the afternoon I read or relax.
In the summer I cycling with my family.
I sometimes go to a pub with my friends or I go to the cinema.
In the evening I watch TV or read book.
  

Top answer

DAILY ROUTINE I get up at 5 o´clock and then I have a shower. I have a breakfast at half past five. After breakfast I go to work.

  • DAILY ROUTINE I get up at 5 o´clock and then I have a shower.
  • I have a breakfast at half past five.
  • After breakfast I go to work.
  • I start work at 7 o´clock.
  • I have a lunch at 12 o´clock.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

4 Answers
0
DAILY ROUTINE

I get up at 5 o´clock and then I have a shower.
I have a breakfast at half past five. After breakfast I go to work.
I start work at 7 o´clock.
I have a lunch at 12 o´clock. I finish work at 15 o´clock. (In America, we say 3:00PM or 3 in the afternoon. If we do use 24 hour time or, military time as we call it, we would say 15 hundred hour.
After work I go ho
0
Hi,

In addition to the corrections above, here are some additional edits about articles.

DAILY ROUTINE

I get up at 5 o´clock and then I have a shower.
I have a breakfast at half past five. After breakfast I go to work.
I start work at 7 o´clock.
I have a lunch at 12 o´clock. I finish work at 15 o´clock.
After work I go home or I go
0
Clive's comments are spot on.
0
Thank you very much, everybody :-)

And It is OK?



DAILY ROUTINE

I get up at 5 o’clock in the morning (or 5:00 AM) and then I have a shower.
I have breakfast at half past five. After breakfast I go to work.
I start work at 7 o’clock in the morning (or 7:00 AM).
I have lunch at 12:00 AM. I finish work at 15:00 PM.
After work I go home or I go sh

Related Questions