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New2grammar Posted 18 years ago
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cyber criminal activities

Police are seeing high tech criminal rings with highly secured networks being infiltrated for personal gains. The conventional way of fighting crime with weapons are completely powerless to stop these cyber criminal activities.

Are there any mistakes?
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Hi N2G Police are seeing high tech criminal rings with highly secured networks being infiltrated for personal gains. The criminal rings have the higly secured networks? Who is infiltraing them?

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  • Hi N2G Police are seeing high tech criminal rings with highly secured networks being infiltrated for personal gains.
  • The criminal rings have the higly secured networks?
  • Who is infiltraing them?
  • Who is gaining?
  • } is completely ineffective powerless to stop in stopping these cyber criminal s activities .
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Hi N2G

Police are seeing high tech criminal rings with highly secured networks being infiltrated for personal gains. The criminal rings have the higly secured networks? Who is infiltraing them? Who is gaining?

The conventional way {I'd use "method"} of fighting crime with weapons {perhaps you mean fire-arms -- surely havin
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Police are seeing high tech criminal rings, with highly secured networks being infiltrated for personal gains.

I feel 'with' could be interpreted in two different ways: 1: the possession of whatever comes before it, in this case, criminal rings. 2. an example of the subject. I think the latter requires a comma.

To answer your questions. (The quote function is not working
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Then say "high-tech criminal rings that are infiltrating highly securted networks. (No need to say "for personal gains." Why else would they be criminals?)
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Thanks, GG. Is the following OK? I'm learning how to use with.

Police are seeing an increased in criminal activities, with a growing number of secured networks being infiltrated including ATM networks.
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