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Jo87 Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

CV+MOTIVATION LETTER

Hello everybody! I seriously need some help for correcting my motivation letter and my curriculum vitae. I have never done one before, so if you have any comments or you find any mistakes PLEASE let me know. I would definitely appreciate that!

Thanks, Sara Emotion: smile

P.S. Do you have any suggestions for a better opening or something?!

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Milan, 28 August 2006

Dear Robert Schmidt ,

if you are looking for a determined and detail-oriented person who is willing to contribute to your company success, I would like to encourage you to consider my application for a 5 months internship in your company starting October 2006.

My name is Sara Rossi and I am a 19 years old highly motivated student at the University of Milan, Italy. Currently I’m attending the second year of a three year bachelor’s degree of Economics and Management Sciences, major in Tourism Management.

I have always thought that the theory is the base of everything, but at the same time I am convicted that experience is what makes a person unique. I think that an internship in your company can definitely provide a rare opportunity for gaining the valuable “hands- on experience” that I am looking for. I am confident that courses in marketing, event management, communication and promotion of tourism combined with several business courses I attended, would make me a good candidate for this internship.

Personally, I define myself as an energetic and open-minded achiever with a dynamic, goal-orientated attitude and with an insatiable appetite to keep learning. I have always demonstrated commitment to excellence, through my academic career and through my previous working experience. If you give me the opportunity I would be glad to continue this commitment to excellence by working in your company.

Should you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me via email. I look forward to your response. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,

Sara Rossi

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CURRICULUM VITAE

Name: Sara Rossi

Address: ...

Telephone: ...

Fax: ...

Date and place of birth: ...

Nationality: Italian

E- Mail: ...



EDUCATION AND TRAINING

· 2006-2007: University of Hamburg; Hamburg, Germany. Exchange student

· 2005-2006: University of Milan ; Milan. Bachelor of Science in Economics and Management Sciences - Major in Tourism Management

· 2004-2005: “Giacomo Leopardi” High School; Milan. School of economics and languages. Completion of high school with a comprehensive mark of 100 over 100, A+.



HONORS AND ACHIEVEMENTS

  • Selected for a 6 months exchange program (Erasmus) at the University of Hamburg, Germany
  • Winner of a prize from the bank “Banca A” for completing high school with an overall average of at least 95 over 100
  • Final grade for high school: 100 over 100
  • Successfully skipped a grade in the elementary school




  • WORKING EXPERIENCE

    • Summer of 2006: secretary for the firm ... (Milan)
    • Summer of 2005: receptionist at the “Hotel ....” of Milan, Z Hotels
    • Summer of 2003: Internship at the Tourist Office of Milan; assistant at the front office


    • PERSONAL SKILLS AND COMPETENCES

      LANGUAGES

      • Italian: mother tongue
      • English: intermediate level both written and spoken; “First Certificate in English”, grade A (Council of Europe Level B2)
      • German: intermediate level both written and spoken; “Zertifikat Deutsch”. (Council of Europe Level B1)
      • French: beginner level
      • Spanish: beginner level


      • OTHER SKILLS AND COMPETENCES

        • Good informatics skills; European Computer Driving Licence (Word, Excel, Access, Internet..)
        • Ability to handle multiple task, to meet the deadlines and to work in a team. Strong organizational skills and in problem-solving


        • INTERESTS

          I love traveling around the world and getting to know new people. I’m also very keen on competitive sports.



          Sara Rossi

          Milan, 28 August 2006
  

Top answer

Hi Sara, I've made a number of changes, so please read carefully. You sound like an extremely confident person (which is an asset). Good luck with this.

  • Hi Sara, I've made a number of changes, so please read carefully.
  • You sound like an extremely confident person (which is an asset).
  • Good luck with this.
  • Write again if you need more help.
  • Best wishes, Clive put your full address in top right corner Milan, 28 August 2006 Dear Mr, Schmidt , if you are looking for a determined and detail-oriented person who will contribute to your company's success, I would like to encourage you to consider my application for a 5 months internship in your company starting October 2006.
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Hi Sara,

I've made a number of changes, so please read carefully. You sound like an extremely confident person (which is an asset).

Good luck with this. Write again if you need more help.

Best wishes, Clive

put your full address in top right corner

Milan, 28 August 2006

Dear Mr, Schmidt ,

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