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this is the part of my CV 'Experience'
.Aug, 2017: March, 2018 | · Shell Eco Marathon _Asia · Design Team Leader · Leading a team of seven engineering students to design, analysis and manufacture a hybrid monocoque/space frame chassis fabricated from steel structure and composite materials-Carbon Fiber and E-Glass. The car participated in a competition organized by the Royal Dutch Shell company in Singapore in March, 2018 |
Aug, 2017: April, 2018 | · HPVASME Cairo University Racing Team · Vice team leader · Leading the team's day to day operations, responsible for engineering, design, manufacturing, supply chain, logistics and finance · The Vehicle participated in a competition organized by ASME organization in Penn state University in USA in April 2018 |
October2016:May,2017 | · Formula Student Cairo University Racing Team. · Design Team Member · Design and analysis the mechanical components, such as the chassis structure and the power transmission parts · Cairo University Racing Team is a pioneer in Formula Student competitions not only in Egypt but also in Africa & MENA Region |
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It's very poorly written. Bullet points should all be the same syntax. Yours are not.
- It's very poorly written.
- Bullet points should all be the same syntax.
- Yours are not.
- For example, you have a noun phrase, a non-finite clause and a sentence as bullet points.
- It is very disorganized and gives a bad impression.
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It's very poorly written. Bullet points should all be the same syntax. Yours are not.
For example, you have a noun phrase, a non-finite clause and a sentence as bullet points. It is very disorganized and gives a bad impression.
Vice team leader (noun phrase)
Leading the team's day to day operations, responsible... (non-finite clause)
The Vehicle participated ... (sentenc
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