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Enchantress Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

CV profile (collocations and grammar)

Hello, could you please correct any grammar or collocation mistakes in this profile for a CV?

Thanks in advance.

MSc student keen on working in a team environment and meeting people from different cultures. Constantly looking to strengthen his skills and at the same time enhance the betterment of the company. Developed problem-solving, communication and team-work skills throughout his studies and internship. Well-versed in circuit theory, electric machinery, power systems, power electronics, automation and control.

  

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You wrote a paragraph, but there was not a single sentence in it. That will not impress a reader.

  • You wrote a paragraph, but there was not a single sentence in it.
  • That will not impress a reader.
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You wrote a paragraph, but there was not a single sentence in it. That will not impress a reader.

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