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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

CV opening line, grammar

Does the following make sense? and is it grammatically correct?

"Second year Physics student studying at the University of Birmingham with a strong interest in nuclear physics and hoping to pursue a career within the industry. "

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It does make sense, but is not a complete sentence. I would also add a comma- here is my suggestion: I am a (he is a/ she is a) second year physics student studying at the University of Birmingham with a strong interest in nuclear physics , and hoping to pursue a career within the industry. I hope this helps.

— Sbolton

  • It does make sense, but is not a complete sentence.
  • I would also add a comma- here is my suggestion: I am a (he is a/ she is a) second year physics student studying at the University of Birmingham with a strong interest in nuclear physics , and hoping to pursue a career within the industry.
  • I hope this helps.
  • -S
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It does make sense, but is not a complete sentence. I would also add a comma- here is my suggestion:

I am a (he is a/ she is a) second year physics student studying at the University of Birmingham with a strong interest in nuclear physics, and hoping to pursue a car
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Hi,

In my experience, a resume offers contact information (name, address, etc. and then begins with a simple and direct statement of your objective, including a job title if possible.

eg

OBJECTIVE

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