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Souki Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

cv , i need your advise , should i add something???plzzzzzzzzzzzz

adress XXXXXXXXXXX

XXXXXX

e-mail adresse: xxxxxxxxEmail Removed">@hotmail.com

Phone number :00000000000





PRESENTATION:



Last name: aaaaaaaaaaaaa

First name:llllllllllllllllllllllllll

Date of birth: January 01rd 1982

Nationality: XXXXXX



PROFESSIONAL OBJECTIVE



Seeking a position in an English Speaking Organization requiring creativity and to gain valuable knowledge from onsite experience





EDUCATION



High School Diploma in Experimental Science, Ecoles ffffffffff,

city, June 2005



Foundation year, of HHHHHHH, city, September 2006



Specialized Courses: Personal Development, Business English, English for Commerce, Writing Skills, and Quantitative methods.





ADDITIONAL BACKGROUND



ü Fluent in Arabic, French and English

ü Some Spanish

ü Possesses great computer skills, as I am familiar with most computer softwares

ü I am a very creative person, outspoken, sociable, energetic, organized and always ready to learn more.

  

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com Phone number :00000000000 PRESENTATION: Last name: aaaaaaaaaaaaa First name:llllllllllllllllllllllllll Date of birth: January 1st 1982 Nationality: XXXXXX PROFESSIONAL OBJECTIVE Seeking a position in an English Speaking Organization requiring creativity and to gain valuable knowledge from onsite experience EDUCATION High School Diploma in Experimental Science, Ecoles ffffffffff, city, June 2005 Foundation year, of HHHHHHH, city, September 2006 Specialized Courses : Personal Development, Business English, English for Commerce, Writing Skills, and Quantitative methods. ADDITIONAL BACKGROUND ü Fluent in Arabic, French and English ü Some Spanish ü Possess great computer skills, as I am familiar with most computer softwares ü I am a very creative person, outspoken, sociable, energetic, organized and always ready to learn more. It's a bit thin on your experience and what you can offer to a potential employer.

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  • com Phone number :00000000000 PRESENTATION: Last name: aaaaaaaaaaaaa First name:llllllllllllllllllllllllll Date of birth: January 1st 1982 Nationality: XXXXXX PROFESSIONAL OBJECTIVE Seeking a position in an English Speaking Organization requiring creativity and to gain valuable knowledge from onsite experience EDUCATION High School Diploma in Experimental Science, Ecoles ffffffffff, city, June 2005 Foundation year, of HHHHHHH, city, September 2006 Specialized Courses : Personal Development, Business English, English for Commerce, Writing Skills, and Quantitative methods.
  • ADDITIONAL BACKGROUND ü Fluent in Arabic, French and English ü Some Spanish ü Possess great computer skills, as I am familiar with most computer softwares ü I am a very creative person, outspoken, sociable, energetic, organized and always ready to learn more.
  • It's a bit thin on your experience and what you can offer to a potential employer.
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Soukiaddress XXXXXXXXXXX

XXXXXX

e-mail address: xxxxxxxxEmail Removed">@hotmail.com

Phone number :00000000000





PRESENTATION:



Last name: aaaaaaaaaaaaa

First name:llllllllllllllllllllllllll

Date of birt
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That's an understatement. Very thin.

Your objective is too vague. what sort of industry do you want to work in - what sort of career goals do you have? Just 'a job in an English company' doesn't exactly tell anyone anything, does it. Valuable knowledge of what? what type of environment?

Are you sure you didn't get your high school diploma until you were 23 years old? If that rea
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hello , well actually , i get my high school diploma when i was 18 , i was born on the 1st january 1988 , and this cv is not for applying for job , but i need it for an application to a business school in paris.thank u
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Ah that makes more sense - your date of birth is incorrect on the original.

I would still flesh it out a bit as suggested.
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