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Cv for erasmus traineeship

Hello everybody!

I am now preparing the application for the Erasmus Traineeship and I have already translated my CV; I am worried about possible grammar mistakes so I would appreciate if any of you could kindly correct it. It really means a lot to me!

Thank you


PERSONAL DETAILS (...)

PERSONAL STATEMENT

I am an enthusiastic and motivated final-year student with work and study experience abroad. I am resourceful, hard-working, passionate about Russian and Eastern Europe culture and I would like to develop a career in the museums and galleries sector.

NOV 2016 – JUN 2017 Tutor for part-time students

Assisting and supporting part-time students in their academic experience, offering information

regarding bureaucratic procedures and deadlines, courses, exams and professors.

DEC 2016 – JAN 2017 Work at the university library


JUN 2016 Volunteer work at “(name of the art festival)”

Helping organise the guided tours, the activities for children, distributing gadgets during the art festival “...”.


APR – MAy 2016 University call centre

Over-the-phone counselling and assistance to students.

30/03/2016 - 2/04/2016



21/06/2015 – 10/08/2015

Volunteer work at “(name of the literature festival)”

Helping organise the events and taking care of the writers during the international literature festival “...”.


Internship

Teaching English language to children in a summer camp, making presentations for them, participating in the events organised by (...), working in a dynamic and multicultural environment.


EDUCATION AND TRAINING


2015 - present


SEP 2017 – JAN 2018



FEB 2017 – JUN 2017

4/07/2016 – 15/07/2016



20/08/2012 – 27/10/2015




jul 2014



Student in the master’s degree programme “...

Curriculum: Literatures and Cultures, Slavic Studies.


Erasmus Exchange programme

University of....

Among the modules studied: History of Russian Culture, Russian Cinema, History of Semiotics.


Overseas Exchange programme

Among the modules studied: Russian language and literature.



Journalism summer school (30 hours)

Among the topics covered: history of journalism, news and news writing, interviewing.


BA of “...”

Study of two foreign languages, Russian and English, with particular attention to the cultural and linguistic aspects.



Russian Language Course

Among the topics covered: Russian language and literature




personal skills


mother tongue

Italian



other languages

understanding

speaking

writing

listening

reading

spoken interaction

spoken production


English

C1

C1

C1

C1

C1



Russian

B2

B2

B2

B2

B2



French

A1 A1 A1 A1 A1


communication and organisational skills

Organising ability, problem-solving, working in a team, planning.



digital skills

Competent with Microsoft Office programmes, Internet, social media.


ADDITIONAL INFORMATION


Interests: cinema, art, literature, music, history.

  

Top answer

There are lots of fragments. It has a very disjointed, incomplete and choppy style. The capitalization is erratic.

  • There are lots of fragments.
  • It has a very disjointed, incomplete and choppy style.
  • The capitalization is erratic.
  • There is no obvious parallelism, which, if present, would give it some structure.
  • Overall, it is not an appealing read.
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There are lots of fragments. It has a very disjointed, incomplete and choppy style. The capitalization is erratic. There is no obvious parallelism, which, if present, would give it some structure. Overall, it is not an appealing read.

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